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TheClosetKidnapper

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  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: Ravenclaw Tavern

    Mark I nod, "Do you think we're more ready for marriage or for a kid?"

    Jul 25, 2012
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: The City Of Astan

    Louis I take her face in my hands and wipe her tears, "Don't say that. You don't know this won't work out. W-we can make it so."

    Jul 25, 2012
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: Ravenclaw Tavern

    Mark I think about it, "I don't know. It doesn't matter to me, either way. Do you?"

    Jul 25, 2012
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: The City Of Astan

    Louis She doesn't answer and something makes me follow her, sitting at her side to find her crying. I wrap an arm around her shoulders and pull her into a ...

    Jul 25, 2012
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: Ravenclaw Tavern

    Mark I nod, "Okay. I'm listening."

    Jul 25, 2012
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: The City Of Astan

    Louis I stand and swallow my food, "O-okay. Are you okay?"

    Jul 25, 2012
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: Ravenclaw Tavern

    Mark I take a deep breath, composing myself.

    Jul 25, 2012
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: The City Of Astan

    Louis I drift into thought, the silence too thick to break yet. How is this going to work? She won't be able to stay forever...

    Jul 25, 2012
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: Ravenclaw Tavern

    Mark I smile and pull back for a moment, not wanting things to get too far. She said she had a headache, right? Shouldn't push her then... I set my ...

    Jul 25, 2012
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: The City Of Astan

    Louis I flash a smile back and eat as well.

    Jul 25, 2012
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: Ravenclaw Tavern

    Mark I smile wider and close my eyes as well, unable to keep from imagining our future.

    Jul 25, 2012
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: The City Of Astan

    Louis I thank her for the wine and take a sip.

    Jul 25, 2012
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: Ravenclaw Tavern

    Mark I smile and kiss her back, tightening my grip on her.

    Jul 25, 2012
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: The City Of Astan

    Louis I smile and bring the plates to the living room, waiting for her.

    Jul 25, 2012
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: Ravenclaw Tavern

    Mark I smile and sigh, "I want that. Both."

    Jul 25, 2012


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