TheClosetKidnapper

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Looks good. : )

Indigo I shake my head and tighten my grip around her. No. She is not to be spoken to.

Altrin I lead Dex off the porch and sit on the grass with him, asking him questions and trying to keep my eyes off the scar running down his cheek. ...

Altrin In order to retain some dignity, I pull my little brother outside and bear hug him. Well, I would have hugged him if he wasn't a ghost. He smiles ...

There's so many people talking at once! Lol.

Altrin So many people speaking... Only the last one interests me. I turn to the boy that'd appeared out of nowhere and recognize him as Hades' successor. "Y-you would let ...

Allan He takes me in his arms and holds me, explaining himself. "I-I just..." I'm not sure how to explain it. "Y-you won't lose me. I-I just don't want to ...

Altrin "He wasn't even six," I say through grit teeth, "However nice the Underworld is, the way he was sent there was far from it."

Okay, well my character isn't stupid.... Lol. She may be new to this, but she's not stupid.

Training her? I thought Molly hated Rayah...

Altrin I mentally groan at her question, leaning against the doorway. "My beef ," I emphasize her word choice, "is the fact that my little brother was ripped from me ...

Allan I open my mouth to respond but close it quickly, not sure what I want to say. "Just... I-I..." I swallow, trying to come up with something other than ...

Altrin "No sh*t," I scoff, crossing my arms, "And I'd appreciate it if you didn't tell me what I already know." I scan over them. "And it's Gemini, master of ...

Altrin "Excuse me?!" I pull myself away from the other girl and dusted my shoulder off, fixing my collar. "Someone needed to extinguish the party before it got too wild, ...