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TheClosetKidnapper

Rocky

  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: Mount Olympus [9]

    Elijah Shifting, I trot after her and cut her off.

    Dec 31, 2012
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: City by the Sea 2

    Joseph I keep quiet and squeeze Melissa's hand again, Frank's heart seemingly beating in my own ears.

    Dec 31, 2012
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: Mount Olympus [9]

    Elijah I face forward and don't answer her, listening for the patter of her friends.

    Dec 31, 2012
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: Mount Olympus [9]

    Elijah I study her, "You say that now."

    Dec 31, 2012
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: Mount Olympus [9]

    Elijah Psychopath... Hm. Maybe. I stomp my cigarette out and sigh, leaning against a tree, "Whatever you say, sweetheart. When I'm Alpha, you might just have to."

    Dec 31, 2012
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: City by the Sea 2

    Joseph I nod and kiss her cheek in thanks, squeezing her hand.

    Dec 31, 2012
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: Mount Olympus [9]

    Elijah I keep a straight expression, "I don't often take orders from my own Alpha. I'm certainly not taking orders from some scrawny she-wolf with a pretty accent."

    Dec 31, 2012
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: City by the Sea 2

    Joseph I flash another smile and move my hand to my throat for a moment, "It itches."

    Dec 31, 2012
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: Mount Olympus [9]

    Elijah Oh, it's a girl. Nice. I refuse to look away, to submit to her, and continue to smoke, "Call off your friends. This is my backyard. I can be ...

    Dec 31, 2012
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: Mount Olympus [9]

    Elijah A white wolf stops a few feet from me, growling and tilting their head. Its eyes draw me in, and I find I can't look away right away. Taking ...

    Dec 31, 2012
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: City by the Sea 2

    Joseph I nod and don't take my eyes off of Melissa, ordering the same and flashing a smile at the joke Frankie makes.

    Dec 31, 2012
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: Mount Olympus [9]

    Elijah I freeze in step and take the cigarette out of my mouth, closing my eyes and listening. The scent of... snow--if snow has a snow--catches a little further down, ...

    Dec 31, 2012
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: Mount Olympus [9]

    Lol. Ight. Elijah With a cigarette through my teeth, I walk through the woods and shove my hands in my pockets. I think over what happened with Austin... and then ...

    Dec 31, 2012
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: City by the Sea 2

    Joseph I keep her hand and catch scent of everyone inside, even though there aren't many.

    Dec 31, 2012
  • Completed Hall of Fame Re: Mount Olympus [9]

    Lol. Like, now? Jag I smile and kiss her quickly.

    Dec 31, 2012


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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