TheCrimsonQuill

Hello! I will reviewing your work now :) who want to hunt my friends and me down, and study us, why I don’t know, but it can’t be good. WAY ...

I loved Yoite too, so this literally touched my heart :) It is an excellent piece for your first post :P One thing I would like to point out: You ...

Excellent job! It was a good thing that you kept it short because a lot of questions rose up in my mind as in how the dad died or where ...

Hello! I will be your reviewer :) that I tryed It's actually 'tried'. he greeted , sitting down Yes? No? Maybe? This is only an option :P That's about the ...

Hello! I will begin to review your work now :) warning for me to back away , but I was curious I thought it would be a bit better if ...

Yet another wonderful piece from you :D I'm not exactly sure if I told you this already, but I have fallen in love with your descriptions and imagery. Keep up ...

Hey there! I'll be reviewing your work now :) As she continued to wonder, she could smell that raunchy Calvin Klein perfume, she felt sweat drop onto her body and ...

You've left me speechless. The amount of emotion I felt blew me away! One comment: Just like the first reviewer had said, 'evermore' doesn't quite fit, but it kind of ...

Hi! Okay, first off, great choice for a title. It grabbed my attention just like that :) One comment I have to make is the amount of information you put ...

Hi :) I've got to say this got me hooked. I felt as if it should have been a tad bit longer, but you still got your point out nonetheless. ...

Hello! It's me again ;) I've found some typo's and stuff, but I can see people already corrected them for you so I'm not going to hound you about it. ...

Hello! I'm really not good at intros, so I'll just jump to the case, okay? First of all, I felt as if the story could have had more of a ...

Hello, I'll be making a few comments about your wonderful piece :) My suggestions are in bold. Tonight , they were to attack. I just thought that maybe it would ...

Hello:D I don't demand. All my comments are suggestions or corrections. The engine was shut off and all noise was eliminated before too much attention could be drawn. I'm not ...

I REALLY enjoyed this :D Maybe you could make it into a book, like as in them sending letters to each other or something. I don't know. It could be ...