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Re: Thoughts
Hey Jaylin! I really appreciate your feedback. I agree with your critiques and will revise the poem soon. Thank you for writing the review!
Apr 7, 2017 -
Re: Cleaning up the house.
Your poem is so macabre and very enchanting. I would love to know the meaning behind it. The repetition of "I am alone" really creates an eerie vibe. I love ...
Apr 3, 2017 -
Re: Graceful Twirls
I love the visuals and the meter in this poem. Very beautiful! I can easily imagine the dancer and see her movements.
Apr 3, 2017