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TheEvilWithin

  • Fiction Discussion Re: Top 5 Worst Books You Ever Read

    4. Breaking Dawn (Ugh. No plot, no character development. Boring!) No character development? Bella turns into a vampire. But yeah, it still sucked. I wanted a huge fight at the ...

    Jun 7, 2010
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Ways to keep a reader interested and get more likes!

    The best way to get likes is to review other stories and make friends. I don't think you should tailor your story to keep people interested (like, overusing cliffhangers and ...

    Jun 7, 2010
  • Fiction Discussion Re: I can't start one! huhu :'(

    I would advise against writing the ending or middle of your story first. I write in a linear fashion, just how life goes. In a line. Also, it's easier to ...

    Jun 7, 2010
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Top 5 Worst Books You Ever Read

    5th: The Wasp Factory 4th: New Moon 3rd: Eclipse 2nd: Twilight 1st: Breaking Dawn

    Jun 7, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: my first story ever.

    I like the hair thing, it's really interesting. I want to know why he killed that girl's sister. Also, there were a lot of mistakes, but not enough for me ...

    Jun 7, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: The Evil Within (prologue and chapter one)

    Okay, I redid the prologue so that it is in third person. I'm hoping that it will be a little more enjoyable than the last version, and that I am ...

    Jun 7, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: (Name to be determined) A short story

    I'm not going to tear this apart because I don't have that much time, but here are a few pointers. 1, You need to space your paragraphs. Nobody wants to ...

    Jun 7, 2010


sometimes i don't consider myself a poet but then i remember that i literally write poetry
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