TheMythMaster

This is awesome, I'm seconding the short and sweet. Also, on a random side note, just from seeing the title before I'd read the actual poem, I feel like it ...

I'm glad you enjoyed this so much! It seems like I've got the atmosphere I was trying to convey across. And as for Tolkien it is partly inspired by a ...

Hello HildegardHope, thanks for your review! You definitely pointed out the main flaw of the song, I think I may play around with the formatting about and see if that ...

This is a really cool poem! Did you make up the irish lyrics yourself or are they form an old song? I like Celtic mythology, and languages, so this was ...

Hello! This is quite a vivid chapter you've put together, and it builds tension well, beginning with Lily's annoyance at Iris, andoving into Talyn and Hyancinth's intriguing news. Speaking of ...

I'm so glad you liked my little poems! It's interesting that you noted the first has a lot of interpretations, I guess I didn't realise that. It's supposed to be ...

This is a really lovely poem! I love all the creativity in the symbols and things, they're very fun. My favorite was the "mi_sing wings"

Hello Rebel, thanks for the review! I appreciate how honest you were, I definitely need to work on pacing, and as for the grammer stuff, I%u2019ve only lightly proofread this ...

Helloo thanks so much for the review. Wow I did not realise Aster came off as such a jerk... I intentionally made him worse than in the first draft because, ...

Question for people reading or reviewing: most of the chapters are about as long as this one, or often even longer, would it be easier if I split them up ...

So, first of all, thanks for the review, it means a lot. However, I'm not entirely sure how to say this, but, the quotes you've put, aren't from my story? ...

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! And in particular I was going for a fairy-tale/Hobbit feel so I'm really glad that worked out. And thanks for your comments about the ...

I'm glad you liked it.

*claps and nods assuredly*

Since it's so long I've seperated it into three parts, feel free to review only one part, or the whole thing.