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  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Brightest Star (By Lavender)

    Thanks for the review, foxgirl! Well, this is the 7th poem (or, the first one of the 4th pair of poems) for the anthology of poems I am writing ("Of ...

    Apr 8
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Brightest Star (By Lavender)

    Thanks for the review, Nataleeen! I am glad that the ideas and imagery come across well! What do you think is the one-word answer that Lavender is seeking?

    Apr 8
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Narrative Re: Dear Professor Caesar

    YOU ACTUALLY CHECKED IT, I AM SO HAPPY!! (AND SO SORRY ;-;) Yeah, so, I was new to prose when I wrote this so I didn't exactly understand the concept ...

    Apr 8
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: A Peasant's Plea

    Thanks for the... comment, Tika! This is referring to Napoleon's stupid 1812 Russian campaign, yes, where Tsar Alexander I used the scorched earth tactic to screw over Napoleon's plans to ...

    Apr 7
  • Poetry » Humor, Horror Re: A terrible poem

    This poem is truly GOATed

    Apr 6
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Ever-Changing Stasis (By Lavender)

    Thanks for the review, aquarious! I am glad that you like the rhyming structure, it's a prominent feature of Lavender's poetry -- the persona writing this poem -- and it's ...

    Apr 6
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Final Kiss (By Jasmine)

    Hey there, Tika! Thanks for the review as always! :p About 'in', yeah, that was a brain fart -- thanks for rectifying it! Yeah, so, I am planning to make ...

    Apr 6
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Breath of the Wild (By Lavender)

    Hey! So this is more of a series of poems that I have recently started for the National Poetry Writing Month where two locers, Lavender and Jasmine, exchange poems to ...

    Apr 5
  • Poetry » Humor, Romantic Re: I LOVE LIFE!!! (By Jasmine)

    Hey there, LarsJane! Thanks for the review and welcome to YWS! About the line, it was more of a warning that was intended to say something along the lines of ...

    Apr 5
  • Poetry » Humor, Romantic Re: I LOVE LIFE!!! (By Jasmine)

    Thanks for the review, STATSCREAM! The poem is written in free verse and it is a form of poetry that does not rely ot rhymes or lyric struture, but the ...

    Apr 5
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: It's You, My Love

    Thanks for the review, Tika! (I am calling you that from now on, I hope you don't mind lol) I mean, it's more of a lullaby with a soft opening ...

    Apr 4
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Final Kiss (By Jasmine)

    Thanks for the compliments, melomorri! :p

    Apr 3
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The First Question (By Lavender)

    ALSO, JUST READ THE LAST LINE: AWWWWW THX A LOT

    Apr 3
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The First Question (By Lavender)

    Thanks for the review, Tikaya! Also... DING DING DING!!! Correct! Check out the follow-up poem by Jasmine in the next one in the series if you wanna know how she ...

    Apr 3
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The First Question (By Lavender)

    Hey there, sophie, thanks for your review! As it's a series of examples, the colon is intended as it is. Also, satyric is a different word, it means having wanton ...

    Apr 3


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