TheRebel2007

Thanks for the comment, and yeah, there were some other words in the poem which I removed - as they were too childish. I wrote this poem three years ago. ...

Thank you for your review, LizzyTyler! You have interpreted it exactly the way I wanted to express. To be honest, I didn't really expect so positive comments, as this was ...

Thank you for your review, LizzyTyler! You have interpreted it exactly the way I wanted to express. To be honest, I didn't really expect so positive comments, as this was ...

Thank you for the review, eilisBK! "Beware'st" can be considered as use of poetic licence. I put the word there because basically the first stanza is there to beware people. ...

Have a good day! I always like Haikus, the beat of it itself gets to me naturally. Although (I suppose), all three of the stanzas were supposed to be haikus, ...