TheRose

Echoes of coins tossed into it's embrace; lost in murky waters I believe the right word is "its" It's only a suggestion, but the flow of the poem would be ...

I thought it was very very good. I liked the plot and I like the way you describe some things like "Like the root of the tree, your online connection ...

I think it's awesome. It's really romantic-dramatic but not in that cheesy, awful way. It flows and it sounds really good when you read it out loud. You got some ...