TheShauzer

Hey Mad :) nice to be reviewing. I enjoyed this poem, you came at the idea of romance from a different angle and I really like it. I do have ...

Hey myjaspercat, it was nice reading your piece. I found some things about it a bit frustrating though. Like, it's a great attempt at a first screenplay! Don't get me ...

Hey King, I really like the intro. This is a piece that I, admittedly, would never write because I simply don't write things that aren't fiction. But if I did ...

Ah I like it. It was a good concept, Jesus talking to his Dad. It really confused me at the start because I thought that it was a boy talking ...

Hey Mad ;) I liked it, yes. But I felt it lacked in comparison to '"I Would Kill Myself"'. I liked the idea, you know, that you would wait all ...

Wow. For a person who's only written for school you're really good. The message - you carried it across brilliantly. The unspoken truth I guess, this is one of those ...

Hey Morrigan, i wish I could critique a bit more but there's really not very much to critique. I wish this piece was longer, I wish I had wrote it ...

Hey CandyWizard, TS here reviewing. I appreciate what you did here and think that it is a little funny, but I think it could be a lot better. In saying ...

Hey ticktock, TS here reviewing. I really enjoyed this piece. I thought that it was sweet, and simple which made it a nice comfortable read. But then 'boom!' it's sad ...

Hey niteowl :) TS here reviewing. I liked this. It really made me think. I'm not sure that I've read or reviewed any of your pieces yet so I was ...

Hey MergSword, TS here reviewing. So I like the idea of starting each line with falling. I think it gives the poem uniqueness and just sets it apart from the ...

Oh my God man, this was definitely a 'giggle' piece. Honestly, every time I read one of your pieces I - at the very least - chuckle to myself. I ...

I almost don't want to review it because of it's near-perfection as regards the style. Carina this was absolutely wonderful; the whole time you managed to maintain the slow degradation ...

Hello again Strange! What a completely peevish and outrageously overblown squibble we shared the other day. I'm here to review. I like this. I like it for different reasons. Mainly ...

Well done Margo, that was truly absolutely pathetic. I think you failed a bit in the end though, by succeeding, because I found at the end that your style was ...