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  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: Fofofoforced Joke Haiku

    I'm so stifled as to how I'm supposed to review. i want points, d******! I mean *cough cough* I'm only reviewing because I'm very passionate about joke haiku's. I always ...

    Jul 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Literature Re: reflected reality

    Who cares about the punctuation right? It's the content that matters here. I started off unsure. I was reading and my thoughts were like, "Hmm... a bit amateur, a bit ...

    Jul 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Forever

    I'm so unsure as to how I feel about it. I mean, I like the ideas and the true story you're telling us because I myself am in a long ...

    Jul 7, 2015
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Someday

    That was really nice hermione. Usually I would never review lyrical pieces and to be honest I wouldn't have reviewed this one. But then I clicked into it and started ...

    Jul 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Does it Bother You? (Edited)

    I complete agree with snoink as regards the whole 'blog entry' comment. It's nice and I know you're trying the whole 'taking a stand' thing, and I support your opinions, ...

    Jul 3, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Senseless Hope

    Nice. I'm not going to go into details because really I can't, and anything I say will just be for the sake of writing more. But I like what you've ...

    Jul 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Rearview Mirror

    Hi there, Guilty Spark. TS here reviewing. This will be the first review on this poem that actually offers critique, I think :') I liked a fair few details of ...

    Dec 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Paper Crane

    Hi Firepower :) you reviewed my piece, so here I am! TS reviewing. I liked the idea behind this, a person whose obviously very important to you or in general, ...

    Dec 1, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Bedtime

    Hey Purple, TS here reviewing. So, I was surprised when I looked over and saw the name 'Purple' again after only reviewing a piece of yours yesterday, but then I ...

    Dec 1, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Our Tree

    Hi Purple, TS here reviewing. I saw your name and thought, 'Hey, I think I've reviewed one of this person's poems before!' I looked at the related items and noticed ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: You know what?

    Hi PoeToaster, TS here reviewing on a lovely review day. Your piece was very emotional indeed. It had very strong vocab and definitely told us how you felt. It had ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: a really big H

    Hi vibe, TS here reviewing :) This piece, in all honesty, bored me. A piece of poetry should do the exact opposite of this, it should drag you in to ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Fragile surrender

    Hi Flite, TS here reviewing. I really liked this piece; it had nice imagery, a lovely rhythm throughout and a nice use of vocab. The flow never faltered too, which ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Overload

    Hello Mr. Musicandme, TS here reviewing :) I enjoyed this piece more than a lot I've come upon today - so thanks for that! For the good parts, I thought ...

    Nov 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Cuils

    Hi Johanna, TS here reviewing the strangest piece I have ever seen on YWS. I'm sorry, but this review won't be very long because.... I thought this was brilliant! You ...

    Nov 29, 2014


More than anything she wanted the world to be uncomplicated, for right and wrong to be as easily divided as the black and white sections of an Oreo. But the world was not a cookie.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Tree of Wishes