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Re: it was her smile
I really love this poem. I loved the syntax that you used with alternating between the beauty of the woman and the critical moment. This is a fun poem to ...
May 10, 2015 -
Re: She Became Another Building, Broken Open
Yes. Just yes. This is so beautiful and the alliteration adds to the tone so much! Usually alliteration can be overbearing but in this case, I think it contributes to ...
May 10, 2015 -
Re: Sorry, I Don't Believe In LOVE
I think this is very well written and deep. It gets to the heart of the matter which I really liked; there were no mixed metaphors or puzzling imagery that ...
May 10, 2015 -
Re: Lost in the world
Loved the first stanza, especially the line "those that are just inches away/oblivious to see that they are just steps away" Profound, but over done, message. What makes THIS idea ...
May 9, 2015