TheTaleAsOldAsTime

Thanks John. You're review means so much. I will expand on my characters. I understand exactly where you are coming from when you mentioned that. I will keep you posted.~ ...

Thank you so, so much. Your review is very appreciated. I will take your review and use that in future writing. It only makes my writing better and stronger.

A/N - being this is my first post here on YWS please leave criticism and tips. Thank you.! c:

Hello Aaoftulsa, I enjoyed this a reminds me of my own writing actually. I honestly can't think of any critiques I can make on this. I sing your praise. Very ...