The_Gift_of_Difference

That was so great! I loved the details! The pictures you created were vivid and clear. And your punctuation was fantastic! I think. I'm not good with punctuation so yea. ...

How in the whole wide world is this SAPPY???? That was AWESOME!!!! I got completely hooked as so as I started reading! The imagery and word choice was fantastic! I ...

I don't know what to call it. And my punctuation is in great need. Do I put periods at the end of a thought even though its a poem? Do ...

I really liked it!! I especially like the first stanza. I like the description. Not exactly your word choice, but it was still really nice!! :D Also the ending kind ...

Hi!! I can't think of a title for if you have any suggestions that would be greatly appreciated!! Elbows nudge past me, In this vicious jungle, I see his striped ...

Oh my gosh. That was FANTASTIC. That was so great. Definitely should be published. Humorous, rolls off the tongue, word choice is AWESOME!!!! I wish i wrote it. :cry:

Thanks! I agree with you about both things. I'll work on more lines and think of an alternative word for slacks!

That was amazing. I really liked the flow and emotion in your poem. It kept me hooked and wanting to read more. It was powerful and made me cry a ...

This is my first post! I hope you like it! And if you have any title suggestions, feel free to share! My hands are clutching my script, I watch in ...

There have always been things that I wished I could do and they'll always be things that I can't...(really love those lines) and I've tried and I've practiced but it's ...