Thegirlwholived

Damn it. I've typed this WHOLE THING about six times because I'm switching between tabs, and the favorites bar is right about that, and I keep clicking it so I ...

Dang, Scar. That's pretty good. The only problem I have with it is You're going over board with the show-don't-tell thing. otherwise, it rocks! Keep it up Kim

o. o Dang. That's REALY good. i mean, REALLY REALLY good. I pick out all the little things in poems, and I can't find a single thing wrong. This is ...

I love it. You're FABULOUS!*likes* ~Kim~

It was an accident. Why anyone would think I'd want to have a kid on purpose is beyond me. I was a Junior , for God's sake. It all happened ...

I agree with baby! It's HUGE! But it's a great photo. You could probably use photoshop to tone down the sharpness, because it kind of hurts. I like it though! ...

Well. Thegirlwholived. First of all, that's just half of it, that I love Harry Potter. But when I was younger, about four, I was in a car accident with my ...

Eli...For being the Mod Nate never gave her the title of. You go, girl! LEAD those newbies!

Hey! Could you please do for me! Thanks ~Kim~

Very interesting... I believe, though, that you could use work on the whole "Show Don't Tell" thing. You kind of just threw the ideas out there, which sometimes loses the ...

Holy tree! I love it!

Hey! You did a very nice job on this piece! However, I think you could use a little work on repetition, and perhaps, instead of footnotes, you could actually include ...

So, Henri has some problems? She seems sweet. You often said things slurred together like this: "From the cake shop?" I nodded. It took me a minute to process this, ...

Alright! So, I noticed a few general things you did here. The first one was that you used the quotation marks as only one. Like and apostrophe. That, I believe, ...

Hello, hello! Obviously, you out there need some review help! Well, look no further for a full, complete review service! Yes, I, Kim Potter, am certainly the fullest and cheapest ...