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I just realized I had been calling you Blue Socks!! So sorry, Pink Socks. I guess I was confusing you with the last person who posted something. =P!

Hello there, Blue Socks! This is James, and I'll be reviewing this. Granted, this is Chapter Two, and I haven't exactly read Chapter One, but what the heck? Oh and ...

Welcome to YWS. First of all, at the risk of sounding like a jerk, you should have posted at least two reviews by now, but I see out of your ...

Dude! I have a rabbit named Lily too. It's spelled differently, but still. That's pretty cool, if you ask me. :] Anyway, welcome to YWS! I hope you have fun ...

7/10 only because I'm not sure what it's from. It looks kind of silly. :]

9/10 Love that! Makes a lot of sense. Lost one point for the "Guilty as charged" because I just never really liked that saying.

A very strong, well-written account. I can really see all of this happening, and the fact that you're able to recognize decisions like that as selfish is an ability not ...

I agree with Antigone in that had this piece been shorter or broken up into sections, I would gladly have reviewed it or a section of it. I don't mean ...

Hi Kelly! :] I'm also sort of new - I just signed up a month ago. Still, I've learned a lot and if there's anything I can help with (or ...

Quite lovely. I see you're new to YWS! Welcome! :] Of course here we'll always accept your writing and photography, but there are a few guidelines. I don't mean to ...

Love the title, by the way. :] I say keep it. New York City. 1995. I was a small girl then, and the only thing that mattered to me was ...

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To start - this was very pretty and obviously well-done. I'll quote a few things, but just to warn you, the majority of them will be complimentary. One must avoid ...

I just realized, I spelled "Grammatically", "Throughout" and "Its" wrong. I apologize.

Well, Mandorelute, you are indeed very talented. :] It was extremely difficult to target anything in your piece that stuck out as something with error. Gramatically, I could find virtually ...