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  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Dear Victoria, You Kill Me

    Legacy here for a review. I love the lines "please kill me with your words again." and "no one can touch you without hurting themselves." They have so much meaning. ...

    Feb 21, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Blood

    Legacy here for a review. I love this poem. I know the struggle of wanting to write so many words to seemingly having no reason. This is so strongly worded ...

    Feb 16, 2018
  • Poetry » Health, General Re: In My Father's Eyes

    Legacy here for a review. I love the message of this poem very much. I am a sufferer of migraines so I kinda know the pain that they feel (at ...

    Feb 16, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I'm tired

    Legacy here for a review. I know truly how it feels to be in a situation like this and you portray it beautifully. A suggestion that I would make is ...

    Feb 15, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Knny (No E's)

    Legacy here for a review. I love how this short story shows the importance of one simple vowel E, since every e was missing from this short. I couldn't read ...

    Feb 13, 2018
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Truest Knight of Green

    Legacy here for a review. FIRST OF ALL WOOW I DID NOT KNOW THIS WAS ABOUT SHREK UNTIL THE LAST FRICKEN LINE. (okay now I'm done with the yelling). I ...

    Feb 13, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: [Review Contest] The One Before

    Legacy here for a review. I dislike the fact that in the beginning you describe blue sky, and then the line immediately after, also describe the blue surf. It is ...

    Feb 9, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Goodbye

    Legacy here for a review. I love the concept of this poem and how positive and realistic it is at the same time. It is very beautiful. You use figurative ...

    Feb 9, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Early fall

    Legacy here for a review. "there wings shining bright..." should be "Their wings shining bright." because of the fact there means a place and their means belonging to someone. I ...

    Feb 9, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Deep Thinking

    Legacy here for a review. First of all, this is really f***ing deep. (Sorry I never cuss on this site in reviews but this one deserves it.) Okay now that ...

    Feb 8, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Love haiku

    Legacy here for a review. I love the concept of comparing love to a dream in such a short way. The last line is such a punch in the gut ...

    Feb 8, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Again

    Legacy here for a review. I relate so much to this poem. It reminds me of how I felt during my abusive relationship and it hit hard. I don't know ...

    Feb 7, 2018
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: lost pencil

    Legacy here for a review. I love the concept of a broken and lost pencil. I would recommend a stanza break after "a big old brown tree" just because after ...

    Feb 6, 2018
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: blossom

    Legacy here for a review :) I love this story of a flower wanting to blossom and join where the rest of the flowers have gone. I don't think you ...

    Feb 6, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: I am sorry

    Legacy here for a review. I love the emotion that you convey in this poem. But I do agree with the other reviewer that the last line of this should ...

    Jan 25, 2018


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