ThomasLoud

And with this chapter, the ball is kept on rolling. It's already been proven this has master wordsmanship and a great hook, this chapter exists to determine whether or not ...

Looking over this chapter I will say that it does a mighty fine job at building interest and intrigue. Before I even move onto the writing itself, I'll first say ...

For an intro chapter, I have to say I'm absolutely impressed and enticed. I "say" this because I feel that there was an understanding of what needed to be said ...