Thorns-and-Roses

I really liked this, I have to say. I mean, it was simple but it is one of those songs that reminds you of the good `ol bubble gum sweet ...

Clo - Definitely was helpful! :) It's good getting this kind of critiquing because its pointing out a lot of things that I never even think about when I'm writing, ...

Aw thank you all. Thank you for making me see some things clearer too. With the Dad, I should work on making that a bit clearer because what I meant ...

PerforatedxHearts: Thanks. I understand where you are coming from and will definitely work on that. It's true I need to get a better feel of the characters and their situations. ...