Tiamkra

Hi! I went back and read this prologue after reading chapter one, which is good, because this extract makes me realise why I need to care about what you're telling ...

Hi! Since you asked, mood, atmosphere and world building it is. Mood & atmosphere: Sombre, although I wouldn't say sad. Very well set up by the first sentence ("Here, the ...

Hi! This was really, seriously awesome to read. I'm a sucker for fantasy, so this should be good. I liked all of your description, as it was very vivid. Your ...

Hi! This is a really cool poem! First of all, I really love the concept and the metaphor you used. I also like your word choice and the way you ...

Hi! (This is my first review - sorry if it makes no sense!) First of all, I really like your writing style. The way you narrate is very interesting, especially ...