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Hi summergrl!! So I mainly wants to go And read this First off because of the title. I don't even know why. I just really thought it would be a ...

Hey!! Before I started, I just wanted to say that this is a very commonly used topic. Not very original. It is also very short. Also, where you said "Theirs ...

Hi! So I really like this. mostly because it shows the pain and struggle and haste in all of life's success. I really like this though much lIke most all ...

Hey, Jasmine!! So, not much to review. I just wanted to say that I feel the need to review your stuff. :D Anyway, I love this. Its simple and to ...

Hi, Craz!! I think this is really cool! You have some true talent here! I really love the topic here! I have seen no spelling/grammatical errors so great job. I ...

Hi! I know this is sad but it is very good. I love how you captured the emotions and what happened. I also truly love the whole topic you used. ...

Hi, Kanome!!, So, I only have one little nitpick. I could tell that her voice sounded depressing. Now, my nitpick is that I would rather like this to be I ...

Wow, Lenora742, First off, here is a belated but nonetheless, Welcome To YWS!! This is very thought provoking and I am perplexed. P.S. you did a fantabulous job and I ...

Hey myjaspercat!!, I really love this! It is awesome and very well written! You seem to have much talent! Perfect job! Although, I do have one minor help. In the ...

Hey Dragongirl!!, This is very nice...well, as nice as this sort of thing can be. I got the sense that you tried to take the bad thing and explain it ...

Hello! Oh, wow! I just finished this and HAD to like it and follow you! This piece is amazing and I saw no errors! I really, really LOVE this and ...

Hullo! First off, the title intrigued me. This is awesome! I love the metaphors! I don't usually like haiku's but I love, love, love this! I also see that you ...

Hullo!! I see that you are my age and this is your first work posted! So, I love, love, love this storyline! I love the detail and time you put ...

Hullo! So, I only saw minor problems such as spelling and punctuation. Other than that, though, I really love this beginning and can't wait to see where this goes! I ...

Hey! Just so you know, no matter how much of a friend we are, I am not going to take reviewing easily. Sorry, but it's true. So, I am going ...