Tigress

I tend to nitpick...but here you go! She couldn’t see anything, but the darkness of the forest. I don't think you need a comma before "but". She froze in the ...

Really great piece! I love how you are showing the depth and complexity of their culture right off the bat. You can always do more research. For example, you are ...

This was quite a bit different than I expected. I loved it! I have to say, we ALL have room to improve. For example, I thought that line (as said ...