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Re: Chapter 2.1: The Beginning
Good day to you! Hope you eventually come back to YWS and continue this š I skimmed the first chapter to be 100% prepared for this dive, so letās go! ...
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Re: The remarriage of Penelope and John
Hmm even without context I like this one. I like the hints that the character knows abt the supernatural, like the mention that her daughter has a ghost and thatās ...
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Re: Sawyerās childhood, his parents in Heaven
Aww I like the beginning of the story. How heās happy abt bringing joy with the magic kit! And yes, I can see why heād want it to be real. ...
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Re: En lo profoundo del pozo
Alright, the first thing I was wondering is abt this line here: āThe arm smelled newā, I did not expect this. Maybe bc I donāt know the fandom and this ...
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Re: Weāve got to go to the city!
Okay another Bart story , here we go. I think hereās a āwasā missing: ā towards Bart, who raking up dead leavesā Ah bc there is more meat in this, ...
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Re: It feels like the universe will swallow me whole
Nvm decided to check this one out after all because I do find Casperās storyline intriguing. Oh maan last time we saw him train but ofc, it canāt go well. ...
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Re: Training for battle
Okay a really short snippet. Hmmm so it seems like Casper was called into battle some time after the birth of his daughter. I like your description of how exhausting ...
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Re: The birth of Suzanne
New folder, will do this one and the next 0 review one today :3 This is a very short snippet of a story. I like that you show a tender ...
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Re: Talia, Damon, and Tristaās thoughts as it all unfolded
Alright, I think I can still remember the characters from this story so letās do this. Never mind. I am so lost. I do dimly remember something abt a forest ...
Dec 1, 2025 -
Re: Of mothers and monsters
How did I miss this? Arrgh How annoying. That would have really helped with the context for the rest of the stories :/ Green Room, you disappoint me once more! ...
Dec 1, 2025 -
Re: The Means to Travel : A U.S. History Screen Play Assignment (Scenes 3-4)
There we go, as promised. Letās see what the Deltas can achieve in the past =D Also, still wondering how they paid for all that, I think you didnāt answer ...
Dec 1, 2025 -
Re: Joy and Sorrow from Tomorrow [Ch. XIII, Nine] - Part II
Annnd we are caught up. I have officially reached the next chapter that continues the story. So onward! Last time, Nine got a reality check bc he thought Six died. ...
Dec 1, 2025 -
Re: Prove 1+1=2...? [Ch. XII, Nine]
I often find myself muttering āRemember remember the fifth of Novemberā so I think there needs no specific reason for why youād make it quote of the day. I really ...
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Re: A Dank Devil Of A Dream [Ch. XI, Nine]
Back to Nine, at last =D Letās see if some of the confusing stuff from last chapter gets cleared up here. ā¦.and weāre straight into hallucinogenic tea, excellent! I appreciate ...
Dec 1, 2025 -
Re: Goats, Bots and Monkeys [Ch. X, Nine]
Next chapter, letās go. First one I read thatās not Nineās Diary! Hm tbh Iām not really feeling this one. I was never much a fan of songfics and this ...
Dec 1, 2025
