Tikaya

And nowww the story of one of the kids. Oh boyy. I really like this introduction to show what her character arc shall be! Hm I feel like I find ...

Look I found a new folder of yours in the Green Room! And this time I can read it from start to finish! Hm I find this a particularly weak ...

I thoroughly enjoyed your analysis on infatuation (which I consistently want to call “infaturation”) and inspiration. I like how you break them both down so clearly and so that it ...

Hi Cats! Reached this story in the Green Room. I already made it to October for stories that have only 1 Review, yay! I don’t think I’m the correct addressee ...

Hach, this is such a joy to read. I really like this line: “slipping seamlessly into a role he hadn’t known was vacant” and how he thinks abt Marin’s position ...

Alright third chapter of yours I read 😊 Ah I was afraid I could never give any genuine tips but here we go. I know the line itself is already ...

You continue to be so good with balancing your narration. Absolutely love the pacing here. I really like your characters and just… Hach, I’m just so in the moment with ...

So I enjoyed the beginning. It’s very whimsical and you’re writings so solid, I could slip right into a comfortable reading zone. And then you hit me with Kei’s reaction ...

Well I enjoy a good fight scene so here we go. I know it’s common in French to separate dialogue from the narrative but it’s just not for me. Not ...

Hi Ravena, look what I found of yours in the Green Room =D I love the water falls. The first picture is so beautiful and sharp! The fact that this ...

So so far I could imagine the room very well and you were precise with your metaphors. But I don’t really feel this sentence: “The room around her seemed to ...

My first thought has been “I wonder why they’re wishing for a clockwork heart.” I mean, I often times think that I wish I were a robot bc I find ...

I am known to be merciful at times, so I shall heed your request! Hi hello! Here to once again try my hand at reviewing poetry. Must admit, it is ...

So since I loved your other story, I’m glad you also have this one in the Green Room. And what a first line to read =D Oh this is intriguing! ...

Ah I wish there was a bit more description of where Zachary is, like what the room looks like before we head into the argument. But I really, really like ...