Tikaya

Ahhh forgive me. I didn’t know there were Book 4 chapters still left in the Green Room, otherwise I would have started with those! And they deal with Shadow’s backstory. ...

Hello! If you ever come back, have this review to read 😊 My first thought is actually that you tend to… do a bit of overexplaining. Like for example “the ...

Ach Schade. Another good story with 0 reviews. Makes me lose hope that you’ll continue. But hey, maybe I inspire some of the other reviewers with this :3 Alright the ...

Alright yet another story from an author I haven’t encountered before. Howdy! I skimmed the previous few chapters to understand what’s going on (I’m improving!) I really like how you ...

So Sange didn’t see Ben. Or maybe there is a time difference between their POVs. Only one way to find out! I rly like the description of the forest at ...

Kinda sad that there are no reviews for this chapter. The last one was super dramatic and now I wonder if I might never get to know the end of ...

Not sure if you’re still around to get those reviews but I shall do my best anyway! Can’t agree more with Ben here: “What could possibly be so scary about ...

I think I finally figured out how to sort the Green Room correctly. And this might actually be the oldest 1 Review Story in the Green Room. So. Here I ...

Ok time to check out the prince’s story. From all I have read so far, he’s the character with the least… presence. At least to me. So let’s see what ...

Alright, I checked and you avoided using speech tags so, I give this part a try. I like that you continue this story, I think it’s one of my favorite ...

Alright next part, after realizing that her friends might have been kidnapped by Josephine all these yrs ago. Just a quick overview since I’m actually running out of energy (Happiness ...

Ah I guess this is where the comment under the last chapter becomes relevant? Because now Stefanie has done something worthy of praise but no one will ever know and ...

Hmm I feel like maybe you didn’t need the pinned comment. If you do it right, it becomes quite obvious through your writing. I’m a big supporter of letting the ...

Hello! Let me get right into the review! One thing I learnt is that passive sentences can break the immersion. Especially if your very first sentence is one. Maybe something ...

Okay last one for today. This is about the parents of Moon and Tuer? Interesting that they are so passive while their children are so passionate! And that when the ...