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Re: Chapter Three - Unnamed LMS VII Novel
Good morning leaf! Here before someone else steals the second review =D Hm shouldn’t it be the attendant “who” was serving him? I like how you included the prices (I ...
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Re: [LMS] Loosely Lawful | 20
Okay, let’s go LL my beloved =D Hope LMS is kind to you, vento ^^ Raw fish didn’t agree with her, apparently. Kali greeted them Did she… did she try ...
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Re: And so, it begins [part two: Jason’s POV]
Hia creeper, came back to read more abt Aeliana and Raisa :3 I like how you describe the doll. Well done :3 And I love how you connect these two ...
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Re: Project Omelas Chapter Zero: Achilles Come Down.
Okay Moth :3 Hello again. Your writing style and I don’t mesh all too well I still want to show my support for someone who writes in such a unique ...
Sep 9 -
Re: Chapter 7
Hia Catz! Let me be the first to read the new chapter
Sep 9 -
Re: A love that slipped
Hia Alex, I know I’m supposed to answer Aiden and stuff. But I’m sad for no reason so time to read sad poetry :3 I have a feeling this one ...
Sep 8 -
Re: Fury in the Wind chp.1 - The Foreign Battalion
Thank you Leya for the Review Template! It is the only one I have ever used so let me rest in my comfort zone XD ❄️ Winter Whispers ❄️ The ...
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Re: Fury in the Wind Prologue - A Shadow in the Snow
Hello Messy, Here I am, as promised, reading Fury in the Wind =D I like how you introduce us to our protagonists here. That said, I think something went wrong ...
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Re: Haven Academy
Ah, smart to put the question directly into the text XD (I feel like when I put them in a comment, ppl can easily miss them~) Hi hellow! I have ...
Sep 5 -
Re: ..
Good afternoon Junebug! I had this on my list for a while and now I’ve come to finally read it :3 I like how you start, with the italics. That ...
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Re: “You can’t save everybody, Jack” (Chapter Four-Chapter Six)
Good morning creeper! I have come to read this next part of the story :3 Ohh that Chapter 4 feels like a somewhat sinister prelude to worse things to come… ...
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Re: TEETH / 2018: chapter 2
I finally found the time to read the second chapter, let’s go! I like the consistent narration! The next she knows, her body is jolting awake. Hmm this one does ...
Sep 4 -
Re: Poison
Hia Hop! I’m pretty sure poems are outside of my usual wheelhouse and I had this on my list for a while now! (which fits the summary xd) Ohh and ...
Sep 4 -
Re: The perfect childhood
Hia I came here for the Checklist Challenge !~ Welcome to YWS (Or rather WriterFeed!), hope you’re doing well :3 I like how you’re not only talking about the unachievability ...
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Re: Jessica’s origin | Part One: Childhood | Chapters 4, 5, and 6
Good afternoon, creeper 😊 Let’s look at another story in the Poppy verse! which was a food stand made to be frightening. I feel like all the other descriptions were ...
Sep 3
