Tikaya

Creeeperrr, this is a really recent story. If I have no impact but you formatting dialogue correctly, I shall view my time on this site spent well. “Hey there, handsome ...

Let’s see what Luke’s deal from last scene was all about. If he says they don’t need to worry … but the rest of the paragraph feels like he’s worried ...

I like that we’re dealing with characters that used to be under mind control and are actually considered “weak”. I’m so used to iron-willed, determined characters that I’m curious to ...

Oh is this a continuation of the previous scene? Maybe consider putting them together. Again, I feel like it's so short that there's not much to say, nothing really to ...

Hm this feels more like a snippet than an actual story. I don't have much to say about the characters other than that I can relate to the denial and ...

Aww what a cute story. I like that he sees his mom in this and that he wants to imagine her in a better place. The description of the painting ...

I love your introduction to the story. I already felt right in the moment and could picture everything very clearly. I also got a good grasp of Rin as a ...

Okay, five small reviews for five stories 😊 Oh from the title, I would never expected the mayor of the city but it’s cool to get her perspective! if her ...

Oh is the prologue maybe Storm’s backstory? Not sure why Blade tells her to leave when he already has her in his grasp and then still sends his men after ...

Taking a break from Cats’ story. Here I am =D I’m a bit confused by this phrasing: “Mosquitoes were said to be found festering within them.“ Because… who said this? ...

Ohhh I wish there was a bit more lead up to the emotional break down of Snake. Like a bit of lingering sentiment, and then when the small push from ...

Let’s head right in: When he arrived, the others were already there. “Hi Snake.” Dylan was there, and so was Raven. First of all, this is kinda how I would ...

I kinda like the prologue. The descriptions were fitting and I like how the woman is musing abt her life. Okay, continuing the trend from the last review: Snake lunged ...

I’m kinda confused why Raven even let herself be dragged back to safety without Dylan when her first words after they reached the safe haven are that she wants to ...

Okay I went a little back to find out if there are other works in this folder with less than 2 reviews. And here we are. So Dylan was one ...