Tikaya

Hi hello! Let me head straight into the review. Here: This sentence feels quite disjointed without context “Dick came at the door.”, it’s just sitting in between the dialogue and ...

Oh I really like your writing style. It’s very immersive and I quite enjoyed all the descriptions! Just a head’s up about dialogue formatting. Teren paused, grimacing . “Audrey[…]” . ...

Ahh another Asher story. I liked the last one and the mystical feel to it! I really feel for this poor guy. He always struck me as someone who tries ...

Ok I took a little bit of a break but I’m back for the interlude now. Aww I’m starting to feel for Dominic. Only a little tho. I know what ...

Alright, I know very little about Hamilton but here goes. First thing first, there’s a typo here “(this takes place after phillips die prob”, it’s “dies” right? From what I ...

Ah this is another story with queen Cordelia. I feel like I’ve read this before. Hmm Oh rrright, the heartstring oath! I really liked that idea! And now we get ...

I like the fairytale like character of the beginning. I also like how you show exactly why Eleanor would like Tyler. And that it makes her forget about her wish ...

Well nothing could be quite as horrifying as ignoring the blood on the floor and then hearing "you will boost my lifespan". That really did throw me off guard, good ...

I really like the rhythm of the poem. I was immediately drawn to the line: I'd retrace every step and rewind the day. Because I know a little about the ...

I like that you can read it literally, as in that there's real smoke that really chokes you and that really does burn the house down but at the same ...

First thing first, I had to check if “Battel” is an English word. Otherwise, there’s a typo in the Chapter Title ^^° Oh jee, poor Felicia. Time for redemption? Also ...

Wohoo, my 100th review. Let’s see if I can complain about Shadow being taken some more in this chapter xd No mention of Shadow at all this chapter, tsk. But ...

While I have to admit that the tournament challenges sound super fun and I would have loved to see how Jarid assigns his squad to them and see them succeed, ...

Ohh I heard so much about Shadow and now we have a tangible proof of him here. And he got taken in Jarid’s absence!! It makes me wonder what kind ...

Okay, next chapter, here goes :) Thanks for the bg info in your comments! I really like the way the queen says this: “Therefore, whoever did this is both a ...