Tikaya

First of all: love the name Deinne :) I know I have not read the first chapter but I hope you can bear with me anyway! I really like your ...

Right of the bat that strikes me as a cool observation: because they are not being limited by set rules of how they are supposed to behave Reminds me a ...

Oh I like how ominous that last sentence sounds. This feels more like the blurb of a book than an actual story though. I don’t know what to feel about ...

Oh jee, oh jee. It sounds like Kyle's parents are not exactly supportive. I'm kinda unclear on how and where Kyle has the opportunity to speak with Ben or how ...

Hia! I really like the setting of the chapter. Night at a museum? Sign me in! I also really like the snake companion :3 I can just imagine the adorable ...

I like that the parents' wishes actually come true, in this main story bc they did want her to make new friends and Jasmine is actually super excited to meet ...

Hm I'm not really feeling that story. I mean it's sad that the daughter disappeared and it's probably realistic in that... well, sometimes things just happen like that. But for ...

I like the empathy that Poppy displays with this: Poppy waited patiently, for she was once the unsure one. That is a really nice character note and also ties back ...

Ohhh that is an imagine and more: And Circe broke that trust. She broke everyone. She tore them all apart and sucked on their bones. That is very creepy and ...

Hi hello! Haven't read the other parts but here I am anyway xd The first thing that strikes me is that you should work on your punctuation. There needs to ...

Looks like I found another Laughing Jack story :) I like Sally's personality and that she's probaly the furthest from what that boy expected xd I am very confused about ...

Hi, hello! I know I haven't read the other parts but I still wanted to share my thoughts on your writing, no matter how disconnected to the rest of the ...

First of all, I really like the urgency you present in the first few paragraphs. And again, I'm drawn to your characters, both because of their thoughts and also, well, ...

I wish you would have given some direction of what feedback you want? That makes it always a bit easier :) Sometimes I feel so uncultured, I don't understand why ...

Now after the first story, I had to see if there is another one with that creepypasta character and here I have found it :) Especially her friends, because misbehaving ...