Tikaya

Ahh more Perdita, let’s go! Hmmm a long, gray bar, with strange scribblings on it, nothing like the art Perdita remembered. I don’t rly know it comes across what she’s ...

Hi hello and welcome! I’m here as a member of the Afterwatch to check out your Short Story :3 I like the idea of the correct breathing technique (maybe in ...

Onto Chapter 2 …why doesn’t this one have a name attached? Or does that mean we are still in Raven’s POV? Also also why didn’t you publish ch1, 2 and ...

Morning Catz ^^ Have come to read your new story! Alrighty! So, your very first sentence has a bit too many adjectives and adverbs so I suggest cutting some and ...

Good morning Vic! I’m here for the Afterwatch, ofc, but also because I like essays—at least this sounds like an essay even if you sorted it under Short Story? Let’s ...

Ah I dont rly mind the centered and bold thing, but like rev alluded to: I do mind the everything-is-in-the-same-paragraph thing :) Hia I have come here as a member ...

Good morning! Am here for chapter 3 and for the Afterwatch ~ Hmmm wait, does Vesna work Saturdays? Or why is Anaka taking care of Sen on Saturday? (ok so ...

Hia and good morning! I came here in my duties as the Afterwatch to check out your short story! First of all I like the stream of consciousness you've got ...

*side eyes this A/N* This one is more acceptable. I still don’t like it but it’s not actively harmful. Hey hey Greer, noodles are definitely real food. Oha he is ...

Good morning Rev! Decided to come straight here before checking my notifs :3 Pro tip: NEVER write “the chapter sux I know” in the leading A/N. Even if you know ...

Why do I have this meme about “the plot thickens” “oh no, the plot clumpens!” in my head when I read “the plot fog” XD Like “the plot fogs, it ...

Did not forget about this last story on the list ^^ I’m so ready to get convinced the relationship between Aidan and “Daithi” is as strong as what Tatiana and ...

Good morning! Saw you posted ch2 of this and decided to show up ^^ I like how you describe Vesna’s job without actually naming it and how much we can ...

Well then! I got intrigued by the name alone! I do feel like… well, I understand the concern in the A/N, I feel like anyone who cannot grasp the concept ...

There we go! Only one of your poems could be worthy of my dragon. Also time get melancholic and sad, I guess. (also not beating the “poems fall from trees” ...