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Re: Into the doll
Hia creeper! The honour of my final review of the day goes to you~ Hmm I think I would have liked a description of how the soul looks like and ...
Jul 19 -
Re: I don't love you anymore
Hia! I saw the reviews you were doing and wanted to give back, even if I’m not that good with poetry :3 I really like this phrasing: i wore your ...
Jul 19 -
Re: how does it feel to almost die (part one)
Hia friend! I want to preface this by saying: I’m glad you survived! Now let’s read what you made of that experience… Ohhh the fact that all this is real ...
Jul 19 -
Re: Name
Good afternoon to you! How do i teach her that ive always been him, but wasnt free? I find this such a good and poignant question. And in general I ...
Jul 18 -
Re: The dirt is staining red in Nigeria
Hia cherie! Ohh more religious mentions… Ah I am so not good with those… But I’ll try my best! This feels like a very raw poem, raw emotion and a ...
Jul 18 -
Re: seeing ghosts everywhere
Hia and welcome! Poetry is not my strong suit but I wanted to take a look anyway (tho I feel like a good summary would go a long way!) I ...
Jul 18 -
Re: rooted
Hia candy! Hope you’re having a fantastic weekend :3 Ohha I guess this heads into the territory of religion. I am left very confused by the first stanza. That’s what ...
Jul 18 -
Re: attack on my mind
Before even reading the poem, the summary had me think of an Inside Out fanfiction I read long ago, where instead of the OC’s main emotion being Joy, it was ...
Jul 18 -
Re: कोख और कब्र
Ah Mangled Soul, I kinda wish I would be able to read your poems in the original language but alas, hello google. Must agree with our favourite potato btw, that ...
Jul 17 -
Re: Fallen Angel
Well then, Rebel also said to interpret his poem how I want to and then was unhappy with my interpretation. Let’s see if I can do better here XD Tho ...
Jul 17 -
Re: The Forest
Hia and welcome! Hope you’re having a great day :3 And oh what a compelling story! I especially like how it all comes together at the end, all the different ...
Jul 17 -
Re: Mementos of a Life We Used to Live
Ohh what a compelling summary! I love this: I always woke up to the fruitful thuds of The floorboards and knew you were home. Also because fruitful is a double ...
Jul 17 -
Re: Prologue - Unnamed LMS VII Novel
Hia! I had this bookmarked in case it left the GR before I could get to it but I guess here I am now =D I really like the immediacy ...
Jul 17 -
Re: “You can’t save everybody, Jack”. (Intro-Chapter Three)
Hia creeper! I like the start of this story, gets me right in the head of LJ here! (especially the thing with the accordion xD) That said I find this ...
Jul 17 -
Re: Touch
Why do I immediately have to think of the Mood Sceptre from Super Princess Peach when I read the summary? XD Aww “unwanted self” is a good phrase but also ...
Jul 17
