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Re: The Ultimate Gambler
Hia Rebel! Watch me not answer the PM and write reviews instead =D The summary gives me hope so for once I shall not feel like a cavewoman seeing fire ...
Jul 17 -
Re: Wildflower's Cry
Hia Catsz! I must admit, I don’t know either of these artists but I really, really like your first stanza! From the way mind, -hind and find flow together to ...
Jul 17 -
Re: Hallowed Ground | Chapter Two
Good morning Scarlett! Let’s read the second chapter of your story, after I’ve seen you work so hard on it :3 I love how you start with a bold formatting, ...
Jul 17 -
Re: Jessica’s origin | Part One: Childhood | Chapters 1, 2, + 3
And one more story today. Hmmm I’m trying to place Jessica but I can’t seem to remember her original story very well. But hey, this is her origin so I ...
Jul 16 -
Re: Five petrifying Richardson stories
But the decision was set. Gabriel was ignoring the pleas of Isabella and William Good afternoon creeper :3 Let’s delve back into Richardson shall we? Though idk if I can ...
Jul 16 -
Re: Jacob is dead--fpotp concept chapter
I was a bit hesitant abt the spoiler warning but I decided to take the plunge anyway. I think you start on a strong sentence. I like how this conveys ...
Jul 16 -
Re: remember when john green said if i show the world my belly it will devour me
I’m more familiar with Hank Green tbh John writes realistic, human stories, right? And he’s been on tumblr *trying to remember other trivia* But that quote is certainly something. and ...
Jul 16 -
Re: The Indomitable Human Spirit [Ch. XXI, Nine]
Good morning XD I feel like the quote of the day is quintessentially GOATSAMA huh? And I am kinda thinking that Nine is also praising the dude in the first ...
Jul 16 -
Re: Nobody likes the basement
Ok last review of the day 😊 Hmm interesting premise. Let’s see what you make out of it. I like how you describe Davon’s thoughts. I just wish you would ...
Jul 15 -
Re: Bethel’s origin
Ohh Bethel. I am so curious how this guy got the way he IS in later chapters! Bring it on! Welllll that is one heck of an intro sentence and ...
Jul 15 -
Re: The many winding paths of Grasscove, U.S.A. : Part Seven
And Grasscove next, the other thing you pinged me abt (which is btw not necessary, I catch all the Green Room works hehe –it’s just the Janice chapters are not ...
Jul 15 -
Re: Heaven and Hell is pretty cringe, actually: Part Eight
Alrighty, refreshed my memory a bit before heading into this! Last time: Amanda! Let’s see how she got here! Oh what an interesting first paragraph. I like the description with ...
Jul 15 -
Re: Ilna - Chapter 5
Good morning!! I do like the questions she asks herself in the beginning… tho I feel “How could she have let herself be absorbed in this book?” comes in a ...
Jul 15 -
Re: Prince Joseph’s origin: Witch’s Wonder, Hell’s Hate
Yay, more Witch’s Wonder!~ Love the first sentence. I like how you show WHERE he is and also what his current problem is :3 But then, I feel like the ...
Jul 14 -
Re: Dani’s origin: Souls and Roses 🍓🩷
Let’s look at this one next~ Wellll either she can’t feel it and therefore doesn’t notice the hurt or she does feel it but ignores the pain, right? Here: even ...
Jul 14
