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Re: Paige’s origin-The Laurence family’s deepest woes
Good afternoon, creeper! Is Paige capable of going through walls? That’s what I think off when I read “she sunk into her parent’s room”; that she was in the room ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 6} Chapter 13 (Part 2)
And good… noon? Midday? Here for the second part, in any case! Hmm we get Shadow reading Jarid’s thought but no internal commentary for what this means to Shadow. Tragic. ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 6} Chapter 13 (Part 1)
Good morning! It took a while but your story finally came up in the Green Room sweep 😊 (And look at the progress in the Green Room!!) Last time, Shadow ...
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Re: Giselle-Alice and the aliens
Good afternoon 😉 Let’s read some more of the Aliens story :3 Maybe, in the first paragraph summary, you could have specified why the café was so special for your ...
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Re: Raining Cats and Dogs [Ch. XX, Nine]
Ohhh what a cover image!! Hia, Tikaya here with the right headspace for more Nine :3 Well tbh nothing ever can really put me in the right headspace for Zero ...
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Re: mona grows quite bored of room 711
Hia how’s it going? 😊 I distinctly remember another poem about the louvre, now that you mention it… I really like the image of the metal ribcage, especially in conjunction ...
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Re: Entry for a (not-so-private) journal
Hia! Oh man ☹ Is the narrator here based on yourself? I already find it sad that not only is the narrator “given” away but they also end up in ...
Jul 13 -
Re: The monster within | Chapter Twenty | Luke
Good morning creeper! I wish we would get a quick info on why it is unusual that the parents invite each other? ….innnteresting that Nicole, the guest, can just go ...
Jul 13 -
Re: Brandy’s origin-Siren’s Desire
Good afternoon creeper 😊 Ohh Siren’s desire now, let’s goo! Hmm if you write “none other that Moon’s Beach” I kinda expected the next sentence to be abt what is ...
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Re: waits
Good afternoon! Okay I do love how the beginning of the poem already reflects how unusual this perspective is. I am especially curious why the last verse of the first ...
Jul 12 -
Re: Beneath God's Weeping Skies
Good afternoon! Love the pictures you added to your poem :3 I also like how consistent you are in the language you’ve used! And that drop after “and I -- ...
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Re: Xavier-Love in decaying hearts
Hia creeper! I think I remember what Love in Decaying Hearts is all about so let’s head right in :3 I think the first paragraph is a bit too overloaded ...
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Re: me, myself, & I (places I keep returning to)
Hello Prudence! Saw your poem in the Green Room and showed up to rectify that :3 I am intrigued by the formatting. Is this maybe a reference to the grass ...
Jul 12 -
Re: A shining day out
And another one for today :3 Ohh another meat eater that really enjoys ice cream. I kinda like how ice cream is a positive throughline through all your stories :3 ...
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Re: When Keir met Mara
Good afternoon creeper =D Ok I do like how we are immediately starting on a creepy note. With Keir emphasizing so much that she didn’t tell him her name, he ...
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