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Re: I never asked for this.
Hi Matt, that sounds like a heavy topic here. Hope you’re doing alright. Hmm as for the poem itself, maybe since you have mentioned all the things that “you” are, ...
Jul 11 -
Re: very awed, immensely flawed.
Must say that every time I read the title of your poem it made me more curious abt what it would contain 😊 I really like how the title sounds! ...
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Re: Ends End Empty
Hia and good morning to you! The summary for this was kinda intriguing, I recently read @rainforest’s poem which did interesting things with placing text and background colours, after all! ...
Jul 11 -
Re: Amias’ second friend
And we have reached the second friend of Amias =D I feel just saying that they are coming up with stories already elevates this play session from the one last ...
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Re: release
This poem has a colour gradient, multiple even. I love it! And I like how the normal, matter-of-fact description of happiness is toward the white-ish part of the gradient but ...
Jul 10 -
Re: Ilna - Chapter 4
Hi :3 I’m deep in the trenches of the Green Room but I decided to make an exception for your story to review it sooner 😊 Who knew tomatoes could ...
Jul 10 -
Re: A tranquil family gathering
Good morning creeper 😊 It took me a moment to place this story but this line is a good reminder: she still felt her father’s ghost linger, like she always ...
Jul 10 -
Re: i have only knelt in prayer at the curbside
Good morning herb 😊 I wonder if the title is a reference to some ppl only praying when they have a real need. The curbside makes me think of two ...
Jul 10 -
Re: Self-examination - I'm no Mortal Man (Mortal Man)
Good afternoon! Ahh and I feel like I might be the opposite of the target audience for this^^° But hey, if it stays in the Green Room for this long, ...
Jul 9 -
Re: Aren't You Lucky?
Hia Shot! After coming from a bunch of poetry reviews, I’m plunging straight into a narrative with such a heavy topic! Let’s read! My first thought is that you are ...
Jul 9 -
Re: Two poems - Lemonade and The Stickman
Hia friendly potato :3 You won’t really find good poetry tips with me, just vibes =D That said I find that I am not that fond of the repetition of ...
Jul 9 -
Re: Mono no Aware
I am even less versed in songs than in regular poetry but so far I loved all the lyrics you’ve written :3 I love the striking line of “trying to ...
Jul 9 -
Re: the daydreams of a fish (when i open my eyes, all i see is the sky)
Good morning canopy! As per usual, lots of likes, no reviews, so here I am. I like the title. I guess, the way fish sleep, they would see the surface ...
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Re: He doesn’t understand, does he?
Oh I at least like the self-awareness Tim display here, saying that all the things he does for protection are actually really scary to normal people. Oh I feel for ...
Jul 8 -
Re: You should come on over, it’s fun! [Kyle’s POV]
Ahh I recently read the other POV, I think? So let’s see if this can provide any new insights. Idk why but the narration here, despite calling things “heavy” between ...
Jul 8
