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Re: It Was Held
Alrighty, let’s find out what was held! Already, I like the sentiment expressed in the first stanza. That just because something is over, unwilling, it doesn’t mean it didn’t leave ...
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Re: Between Us, One Hundred
Ohh like basically fanfic, but for a song! I really like the first paragraph. I forgot the exact rhythm of the song but it was easy to read one into ...
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Re: A Happening
Good morning :3 I think the first few verses of your poem read very well! I like how you establish the base line so efficiently! But what really caught my ...
Jul 8 -
Re: Dear worst bestfriend
Heya Alex! I somehow missed that this was your poem, still in the Green Room. And idk… Something about the way you described it and maybe also even the cover ...
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Re: The Price of Love
Oh that is already a pretty cool starting line for your poem! I like how you immediately immerse us into the feeling of what it’s like to be a child ...
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Re: My Gods
Hmm! I see an interesting format to your poem already! I do wonder what it means so let’s read it ~ Oh no, this feels as if something physical, something ...
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Re: Chapter Thirteen: Two cursed young girls (Part One) (Nina Alexandria Hopkins) (A call from the other side)
Good morning ^^ I am so curious why Nina has no comment on the fact that Alyssa is wearing a nightgown XD Oh I like how poetic this sounds: a ...
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Re: Jeff calls Randy
And one more review for today 😊 Ah okay, I didn’t expect to read of Jeff and Liu so soon again! Hang out? That sounded fun, but a little too ...
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Re: Lazari thinks on it
Okay, this is the next in line after Sam found Sally last chapter, right? I wish you would have added more details on how Sam escaped Lazari, at least what ...
Jul 7 -
Re: Raisa’s diary entry (5/18/1955)
Hello Raisa 😊 I haven’t read anything from your diary in a while so~ I do like the diary style of storytelling. Because on some days, just very little happens ...
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Re: It’s a shame, isn’t it? :(
Had a pretty busy morning so my reviews are a bit late. But here we go :3 I remember the first part of this story well (not least bc I ...
Jul 7 -
Re: 🩷🎪💄 The spiraling polka-dotted path of a clown: Chapters 7-8 🩷🎪💄
I am so confused. I was sure I read this but no, there are no reason for this one. Let’s immediately rectify that error on my part! Hmm I do ...
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Re: Five gloomy Richardson stories
Annnnd back at it again~ Hia once more! AH okay, we are back with Gabriel ☹ Poor baby. Hmmm I feel like ch1 is v repetitive because you mention so ...
Jul 6 -
Re: Syboleth ch. 27: It
Heya Witch Aet! I just realized that there’s this Syboleth chapter that I have somehow overlooked. Blasphemy! I have come for it now :3 Hitting us with the spoiler warning, ...
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Re: the cross on the cliff side in the rain
Hia! I hope you are having a great day 😊 The summary is already very intriguing! Let’s head straight into your poem! I already love the personification in the first ...
Jul 6
