Tikaya

Good morning 😊 This has been in the Green Room for a while so even I, a non-poet, will now try my hand at looking at it ^^ I love ...

And we are continuing with this story~ You know there is something very special in having wrong dialogue formatting right in the first sentence :/ I feel like here your ...

That is a strong opening paragraph! I think the following paragraphs are also pretty good but then comes this: But then, if Jay were a hallucination, then wouldn’t Tim feel ...

Sorry rebel, I took French instead of Latin, so I’ll be doing the English one only XD Ohh I find the line abt treason super intriguing, especially in combination with ...

And the next one on the list~ Oh I know which flyer they are talking about! Still it feels like you could add a reminder abt what this means for ...

Good morning creeper 😊 You continue to have the most stories in the Green Room which is why I am here today 😊 Ah I remember this universe; I did ...

Ok idk why but this appears to be the next story in that folder even if it doesn’t have anything to do with Alyssa so…let’s read this next? I feel ...

Good morning creeper! Your story is next in my grand exploration of the Green Room so hello! Hmmm you have a repetition of “high” in the first and second paragraph ...

Hello and good day to you~ I am not a poet but I do read what has been in the Green Room for a very long time 😊 I think ...

Hia canopy, I realise there’s been a few works abt Greek Mythology posted in a short time frame. Must have been really popular in April for some reason—and I love ...

Hi Larejo! Have you considered maybe translating your poems into English? This might reach a larger audience, and there are a lot of poets here who I bet would love ...

Alrighty, I asked the dice and they landed on your story for the final review of the day. And woah, just reading the A/N tells me this is gonna be ...

I was curious why this was marked as “other” in my spreadsheet so here I am! Ah and it is an essay about Gilgamesh, let’s goo! (I recently rewatched the ...

Hmmm this one next, hi again =D I think part of the beauty of fic is giving the characters unexplored traits that we enjoy, especially when they don’t contradict canon ...

Hmm maybe this one will work better for me, it is much longer after all =D Although right in the first sentence… I feel like it’s v unnecessary to also ...