Tikaya

Five is my favourite number so I’m hyped for this :3 I do like the first sentence! But I feel like if you go for such a beginning, it calls ...

Heya~ I like how you start with setting the scene! I feel like you rely too much on adjectives/adverbs but otherwise, great start! What others do you mean here? “where ...

Morning! Oh my… the story from Thorn’s perspective. We all know why she digs that hole but I am curious if he knew too… “ and she was happy to ...

Since I’m posting long chapters, I like to check out what other people put into theirs =D And also I am curious what another person who read Nine likes to ...

Good morning and a warm welcome :3 Let’s take a look at your work, shall we? It might be helpful if you put a bit more info abt your work ...

Ah, the quote of the day~ I did miss those =D Hia Rebel! Time for me to read more Nine huh, it has been mentioned often enough in April XD ...

I know I know, it is free to watch… but I seem to never find the time to watch anything but Starcraft Videos while I eat my lunch @.@ So ...

Gooood morning!! As promised, ch4! ….this reads a lot like a first draft. Like… from the typos, missing commas and the somewhat stilted flow of their dialogue… I have trouble ...

And a bit more of Asher 😊 I do like how you structured this and that you mention all the major players. I feel like Asher would have been a ...

Hia again today. I tried reading this yesterday and idk why but I couldn’t concentrate. So let’s try this again! Ok and that is a sinister sentence to read: “Another ...

Well then, you didn’t answer my PM but your work still remains in the Green Room so let’s look at this context-less pre-climax you have here 😊 I already like ...

Ok came here in search of clarity. The confusion continues but I do like the dialogue in the first paragraph (even if it is still hard to follow!) I also ...

So this has been in the Green Room for a while and I’m kinda sure I am not the intended audience… but there’s nothing wrong with looking at the writing ...

I figured it out! I read the title wrong! Chapter 12 here I come! Alright if this is the direct continuation… Is the stuff that Jeff pointed out last night ...

I am confusion. I’m trying to find Chapter 11 Part 2 but there is only Chapter 12 Part 1 so…what is going on and now I ended up here so ...