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Re: Princess Magdalena’s origin-Siren’s Desire
I maintain that I like it when your origin stories begin with “there once was” etc and an explanation of who we are following this time :3 But! I also ...
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Re: Eunice’s story-Siren’s Desire
Catching up on some of the other folder stories I missed~ I like how you settle us into the story with the first paragraph. Feels like I got a bunch ...
Jun 12 -
Re: Charles’ story-Zombies of Mariesville
I kinda like it when you start these snippets with a summary of who we are engaging with 😊 That said I find this one really really really short and ...
Jun 12 -
Re: Josette’s story-Zombies of Mariesville
Hmmm I remember I wasn’t that happy with how Braden’s side of events went but maybe Josette can win me over. I like the first paragraph and that it at ...
Jun 12 -
Re: Emberlynn, Juniper, and Dakota pass on
Came here in search of answers. Ok at least Brooklyn gets mentioned again. So we have another big jump forward. Also… I wish we got an explanation here on why ...
Jun 12 -
Re: A little friend
Last time: Against better judgement, our two MCs left for the outside despite the train coming soon… Now, where will the snippets take us this time? *reads first few sentences* ...
Jun 12 -
Re: Inner clown
Not Janice, but Emma, gotcha :3 I love these lines: Friends, they fall But makeup stays on It really shows where her priorities are! Same for these btw: You’re a ...
Jun 12 -
Re: Five miserable Richardson stories
Alright, hand it to me, the miserable time 😊 I am ready ! “Most people don’t see me. Some do, though. Some people see me. I lock eyes with them ...
Jun 12 -
Re: Cyprian’s story
Wanted to read the other related story too so here I am ^^ I have 0 connection to Veterans Day so my opinion is: you might as well use it ...
Jun 11 -
Re: Wanette’s story
Good morning ^^ I was wondering where this would be going since the beginning was a little slow and then you hit me with this: “The world was full of ...
Jun 11 -
Re: Desmaire Parrish’s origin
Hia!! Went ahead and looked at the gacha designs and I just love Frederick’s clown outfit and hair~ Onward to the story! I have a vague memory of Lucille being ...
Jun 10 -
Re: Raven’s origin: Souls and Roses 🫧🫀
Ah I had a bit of a déjà-vû! But ofc this is the kid’s perspective after I read the parents’ perspective a little while ago! I feel like the slower ...
Jun 9 -
Re: Morning breakfast
So curious in fact that I read the other story right after! I do feel like you could have had a tiny reminder what kinda letter she talked abt, just ...
Jun 9 -
Re: Letter for Poppy
Heya~ After the few Poppy side stories, back to Poppy-for-real XD I also find her having a mirror she can look at first thing in the morning a cool character ...
Jun 9 -
Re: When Shadows Ring- Chapter 3
Morning Laylay~ I’m jumping in at ch3 so let’s see what you have in store for us ^^ I like how the first paragraph is dripping with personality :3 (Also ...
Jun 9
