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Re: Jason’s biggest fears
Next up! Jason! I like that you gave the little girl a name; it feels very aappropriate and a necessary step! And Iike how you describe how she's still haunting ...
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Re: When Jeff and Jack met
Good morning! :3 I guess I will take a look at all the stories in this folder now that I was missing out on! Starting with this one! And I ...
May 30 -
Re: When Henry met William [Henry’s POV]
Heya creeper~ I remembered that I wanted to check out more FNAF :3 First thought is actually: Why did you out “that was his name” in here? “Henry did not ...
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Re: An Ordinary Day in Night City
Hia Nicarose, this is like the third time I attempt to review this in full. Must say that you saying you don’t really want feedback really put a damper on ...
May 30 -
Re: Army Boy: Chapter 4 (DRAFT)
I know there’s been talk abt a review template but I’m a stream of consciousness kinda gal soooo here we go! I remember your first draft of the first chapter ...
May 30 -
Re: DEER EYES chapter 1
Well well well, good morning to you! You have summoned me and I have come! Hmmm I didn’t know windows can be lanky… *blinks* Okay and it’s getting even more ...
May 29 -
Re: most beautiful thing
Good morning! I was intrigued by your summary, it feels very poetic! I really like the flow of your work. It feels like it sits in the middle of poetry ...
May 28 -
Re: Sisyphus: Your Wrongs Haunt Me
You know canopy, everytime I go through my spreadsheet of the Green Room, I get stuck on this intriguing title of your poem. And I was always hoping someone who ...
May 28 -
Re: PETALS OF MY HEART
Good morning! I’m curious about a poem with a reading time longer than 2 min, so let’s see what you have in store ^^ I already like how the first ...
May 28 -
Re: Through fire and vengeance 1
Good morning! I have finally come for your story; it’s been in the Green Room for long enough ^^ My first thought is that maybe you could have run this ...
May 28 -
Re: My Black is Beautiful
Hi Dove, I know you said you’ve left the site, but I still wanted to take a look at your poem :hug: I like how you have the bold sentence ...
May 28 -
Re: The Means to Travel: A U.S. History Screenplay Assignment (Scene's 17-18)
Hi Tao! Here for the final section, finally =D Something’s wrong with the grammar in this sentence: “The waves connecting our worlds is already frayed” But I also don’t know ...
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Re: Anastasia’s origin: Witch’s wonder, Hell’s hate
Okay, one more thing about Anna~ And already we can see that Anna is a special child by going like “yup, these wild rats, time to make some friends” :3 ...
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Re: Witch’s Wonder, Hell’s Hate: Part Ten
Ohhh the final story. Let’s do this!! Wanted to give a shout out to the italics that REALLY work for me: “He’s helping his dearest wife try to kill me.” ...
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Re: Witch’s Wonder, Hell’s Hate: Part Nine
Good morning! I decided to do some catch up with this story line. It is one of my favourites of yours ;3 Already happy that the hand is mentioned =D ...
May 27
