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Re: The Times, They Are A-Talkin'! (By Jasmine)
Say can you get an ear worm from text? Because sometimes when I least expect it, my brain goes: a calming notion, perpetual in motion XD In any case, this ...
May 15 -
Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 22
Hmmm I wonder if we ever got a name for the president. It’s been so long since I read the last chapters of Eternal Beauty. Oh I do like how ...
May 14 -
Re: I Am A Bit Pretentious (By Lavender)
That's an excellent end to the first stanza: "With it all -- I'm coming home, honey bun." Really good! Second stanza also has a punchy ending. I am loving this ...
May 13 -
Re: the one where i write a poem about myself (and it's still about you)
Found the title so interesting, decided to check out the poem :3 I like the font you chose for it. Also, second line is really sad :( And why does ...
May 12 -
Re: Witches: Character Sheet 1
I have a question, dove. Why didn't you make this a post in the writer's corner? Do you really want feedback and comments on what your characters are like? Because ...
May 12 -
Re: Not Doublethink, Just Wisdom (By Jasmine)
Hah, I knew the answer :3 I also like that Jasmine challenges the riddle's wording and gives counter-examples and explanations. (I do like how that stanza flows too!) Paradoxes create ...
May 12 -
Re: I'll Be Your Contradiction (By Lavender)
Ok ok you got me to look up something but I still don't get it xd What does "simul falsity" mean? Considering the rest of the stanza, i suppose it's ...
May 11 -
Re: The Marvel of Mankind (By Jasmine)
...Are you sure those first 3 lines are poetry? XD I am the first to admit that I don't get the artform but this feels style-breaking... The second paragraph/proper stanza ...
May 10 -
Re: A Little Bit of Everything (By Lavender)
All of the time... (Yes yes I understand the reference) I even know the answer. Tho I feel like starting with THIS right in your second stanza isn't exactly a ...
May 9 -
Re: You are my Spring (By Jasmine)
Hmmm I don't actually see the connection between riddle and solution. Might be related to how old the two protagonists are? (But then, I rather thought they were in their ...
May 8 -
Re: Why pride not?
Hi Alex! For the first time I got to see the "you haven't reviewed anything today so why not try this" message and so I came here xd I already ...
May 7 -
Re: Our Home (By Lavender)
Thanks for the explanations in the mail (also I like that the poems still function if you don't get all the references. Just nice little easter eggs. Or big easter ...
May 6 -
Re: Let The Sky Fall (By Jasmine)
Solid choices for taking care of someone in the throws of cramps in the first stanza :3 I like how the second stanza flows, how the words match and rhyme ...
May 5 -
Re: Solitude and Odium (By Lavender)
Well let's see what makes you nervous abt this one, shall we? ...the answer is apparent immediately. XD Just from your comments ^^ I think your poem reflects this pretty ...
May 4 -
Re: A Calming Notion, Perpetual in Motion (By Jasmine)
I chose the next poem =D And well, we can disagree on the concept but I still like the answer ^^ Again a phenomenal second stanza. Really like the concepts ...
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