Tikaya

Yay more newspaper articles! I like these =D I like the first one already, especially how you tie this back to Keira having had successful trials before the CIA decided ...

Heya, considering I liked the premise of all your stories so far and was only getting really frustrated about you-know-what, let’s see what you have here. My first thought is ...

Hia =D Figured I also check out your story and maybe make it all the way to the newer chapters too ^^ That said... I feel like the first line ...

I take it, you would have wanted me to continue reading xd I feel like the first sentence works well but that the second sentence could use a trim and ...

Ah so this is part of the moment with Jess? Right now I think the secret weird expense might be Valerie… so him remembering how Jess only ever was attracted ...

…Another time jump? Let’s see how you justify going back 2 yrs which is still 1 yr forward from the beginning narrative. I really like that Val had this friend ...

Well, I too am not a poet XD So maybe this works out for the both of us? First of all: I love the rhythm. I love how I can ...

I feel like a broken record, but I do like to visit the other reviewers portfolio to look at their works—even if poetry usually goes straight over my head! :3 ...

Aww don’t poison the well with your summary =D Let the work speak for itself! Although… Uh poetry is not really my strong forte, I saw all the reviews you’re ...

Ah, we are back to familiar ground. It’s a relief to have a relatable character after the last chapter. Hmm looks like Charlie at least considers Garrett a “friend”. And ...

I like that you mention how rain on umbrellas can be a soothing sound :3 Hmm are you aware of how to do Dialogue Formatting properly? If not, I suggest ...

Hmm and another one! I wonder about the word choice here “he had been given less work than Marcus“ and then I wrote that sentence and now I am no ...

Hia, it’s me again. XD Do you know that 35% of all my reviews here have been for your works! And then they are still kinda underrepresented, given the composition ...

Appreciate the warnings ~ Hia! I find myself with a bit of time on my hands and figured I should look at all the cool stuff the prolific April reviewers ...

Hia, this has been sitting in the GR for a while so let me look at it. It's kinda what I do. Since the work is really long, I'll give ...