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Re: Olivia’s story-The adventures of Poppy McLain
Well I do like Poppy. Let’s see what this newest installment brings. Olivia is Poppy’s mother, right? I like how we get an explanation on her mental state here. Especially ...
Feb 28 -
Re: “He’s mean to you because he likes you”
More reviews! Hm it might be helpful if the link in the story linked to the actual specific post about your characters for this story and not just the general ...
Feb 27 -
Re: It’s been a long day (Ben’s POV)
Idk what is wrong with me today, I can’t seem to get my thoughts in order. Have my review instead. I just realized I read the first part but not ...
Feb 27 -
Re: The monster within | Chapter Seventeen | Nicole
Good morning! I just want to say that this is an excellent sentence to read: Last year, Beth found her in the cabinet of souls and saved her, so now ...
Feb 26 -
Re: Twilight Scottson-Love in decaying hearts
Ah the cover still shows your old username, huh? =D Oh this is one of the things that work really well as a standalone and being so short! I love ...
Feb 25 -
Re: Braden’s story-Zombies of Mariesville
Hia! Let’s move on to this story, shall we? I’m not sure what you want to hear from me. As per usual, this piece is very short and ripped from ...
Feb 25 -
Re: Centaur Stage CHP 1: An unexpected guest {Sanders Sides Fanfiction}
Hia! Since I liked the first story, I wanted to check out your next work immediately ^^ Hmmm I really feel like you’re not starting on the best paragraph here. ...
Feb 24 -
Re: Our Perfect Worlds - Part 8
Watched the video. That was slightly disturbing. Also, how dare you make me somewhat sad for Redman, only wishing for a connection :( I feel like in the video you ...
Feb 23 -
Re: Monster of the internet
Hia! My first thoughts is actually: Why would you ever want to work in Eldritchville, even if you DIDN’T hear all the ghost stories. I just we would have gotten ...
Feb 22 -
Re: Hybrids: Chapter One
It’s been a while but I had this chapter on the dice list for a while and it finally got chosen again ^^ Hmm my criticism from the prologue still ...
Feb 21 -
Re: this is all mine, this is all that I feel
Well that is the thing about randomness: You can literally be the next thing that gets chosen =D Hi Ellie! As promised, let me look at your poems (I read ...
Feb 20 -
Re: The City, Part Nine, death?
Idk why it took me this long to realise that you have the same summary for all of your chapters. Sorry for accusing you of lying last chapter then XD ...
Feb 20 -
Re: How To Kill Your Dragon [Ch. XVIII, Nine] - Part II
Alright let’s do Part II right after, shall we? Then I’ll be all caught up with Nine. Okay and before I can settle in properly, the dialogue formatting strikes again ...
Feb 20 -
Re: How To Kill Your Dragon [Ch. XVIII, Nine] - Part I
Good morning rebel 😊 Excellent QotD again :3 We’re starting on a bad foot afterward tho bc you have a repetition of “out of the room” which is v annoying ...
Feb 20 -
Re: Emberlynn and Juniper’s run
Ah well, another snippet work. Let’s see how far Emberlynn and Juniper can get before Circe finds them again. I think the emotions come across very well in this piece. ...
Feb 19
