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Re: As they both died
Hm I feel like the first sentence doesn’t really help with getting us into the scene. Where are we at,? Also the dialogue formatting continues to make me sad. This ...
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Re: Strangeface Lovelace, your nails are so long and pretty!
This time I noticed the rhyming scheme positively! I kinda rly got into the rhythm :3 See this is what I mean. As a poem, this kinda works even if ...
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Re: The clown’s fate
Gonna see if I can grant a few other things a second review… I like that the poem tells a story. I don’t know enough abt poetry to truly comment ...
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Re: William tells Henry about his odd dream
Alrighty, FNAF I accept as an immediate read =D First question: Who’s perspective is this? Williams? Why does he call his own eyes big and beautiful then? And ofc you ...
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Re: The wedding of Andrea and Carter
Hm once again this is a rather sad length for a post. It’s hard to put something really meaningful in this. I mean drabbles sometimes work; they’re a legit art ...
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Re: Heaven and Hell is pretty cringe, actually: Part Four
I think this is my least favourite story of yours out there. I just don’t really like this whole concept of hell being… ruled by this person. I can’t rly ...
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Re: Elizabeth’s origin: Souls and Roses 🍄💐
I’m gonna write a couple of more reviews for your stories despite my on-going disappointment with the dialogue formatting. I don’t quite understand why she cant bring the child upstairs ...
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Re: Daisy meets Salem (Daisy’s POV)
Wonder if I can squeeze more in now :3 For Violet Victory ! Those are some wise words: “just because nothing happened didn’t mean that nothing would ever happen.” But ...
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Re: It’s been a long day (Kyle’s POV)
I might not be able to find more Sally but I found more stuff in this folder. For Violet Victory ! *reads the summary* Ah well, let’s do the romance ...
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Re: Memories find a way of coming back
More reviews. Half an hour left. For the landslide of Violet Victory ! Ohh a Poppy story. I remember that I really wanted to check this one out. I also ...
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Re: You’re all grown up now, there’s nothing to be afraid of
What even is a plot. Who even are we and what are we doing. All we know is that we need Violet Victory ! Ok I have at least HEARD ...
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Re: Fidget spinners and conversation winners
Let’s see if I can find the plot again. The reviewing plot that is. It’s important for Project Violet Victory ! Okay I find this first paragraph really hard to ...
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Re: Syboleth ch. 3: Special
…I actually think I lost the plot on the entire Green Room. My life is reviews. I don’t know what’s up and down anymore. But I do know one thing: ...
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Re: Syboleth ch. 4: Valor, Dolor
Ok I kinda lost the plot on creeper stories and will do a small detox here with a story I know something about XD Never forget tho: Violet Victory ! ...
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Re: That’s IT?!
Ladila, where am I? Who knows? All we know is: glorious Violet Victory ! I kinda like this limitation of his, or at least that it sounds like one: “But ...
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