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Re: Lightbulb
Good afternoon! I’m happy you started writing a book! So let’s get right into it. I already like the main character’s name 😊 Ari is such a cool pick! I ...
Feb 8 -
Re: Narcissus bulb verse
Hia, decided to try my hand at another poem today! And ofc my first thoughts start spiraling around "Can you make mead out of narcissus flowers?" That said I quite ...
Feb 7 -
Re: the mourning routine of a grieving person
Hio, I am prepared to cry. Let’s begin. I love the way you phrased this here: “to this imaginary conversation you’ve been writing since the moment he left.“ And I ...
Feb 6 -
Re: Paadruman, The Tales of Farting [Ch. VII, Nine]
*reads the summary* *big sigh* Alright. It feels like it’s been forever since I read a Nine chapter xd …where are we at the moment? Last chapter ended with Six ...
Feb 6 -
Re: Syboleth ch. 1: A New Friend
Well at long last we have come to this. Hia Aet! Glad to finally see some sorta ch1 then xd “Damn. Chapter one got hands.” LOL First thought on the ...
Feb 5 -
Re: Hybrids: Prologue
There we go, the dice have been merciful 😊 I already like how you lead into the prologue with these three questions ^^ Okay I can see one problem. Your ...
Feb 5 -
Re: The Sky Watcher: Midnight (part one)
Ah always happy to get to new Sci-Fi stories 😊 Hia starlight! I’m the Green Room Witch and your work has finally come up :3 And we begin with a ...
Feb 5 -
Re: 2. An Abrupt Dismissal (Conqueror Rising)
Well call me intrigued from the summary alone, Snoink =D (I usually don’t notice the summary since I pull the chapter links from my endless excel spreadsheet but something compelled ...
Feb 4 -
Re: This Shouldn't Be Possible! [Ch. VI, Nine]
Hi Rebel! It’s been a while but eventually, random chance will get to you =D Ok where were we… I remember. =.= Let’s see how we handle this “edgy” thing ...
Feb 4 -
Re: 1. The Bloody Swan (Conqueror Rising)
Hi Snoink! I’m surprised this stayed in the Green Room for so long! But never fear, now I’m here and I’m looking forward to the improvements you’ve made to the ...
Feb 3 -
Re: To the queen of hearts
Hah I just put this on my list and it got immediately chosen =D I kinda keep track of ppl who review or comment a lot so this is why ...
Feb 3 -
Re: Luminous nightmare (Prologue)
I know this has been out of the Green Room for a while but I always feel like reviews (and commentators) who put in the effort should get recognized. So ...
Feb 3 -
Re: A Sequence of Words on The Inadequacy Of Language (Pt.1)
Hello! From the summary, I didn‘t expect a poem but here we go 😊 Hmm is “stick” really a material here? “A thousand tools of metal and stick,” I would ...
Feb 2 -
Re: Chapter 4- Close Walls
Hi Dove. Felt like leaving another GR review today and so I have come for your chapter ^^ I love the first paragraph. From how the room feels as if ...
Feb 1 -
Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 6} Chapter 6 (Part 2)
Alrighty, with this I’ll be all caught up on Shadow’s latest adventures. Already, the chapter looks interesting with the huge and bold section. I have a bad feeling about this ...
Feb 1
