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Re: Chapter Two: Welcome to Nowhere
Good Morning :3 Time for chapter 2 of Nova I like this description! “The house looks like it’s part of the forest, like it grew there instead of being built.” ...
Jan 9 -
Re: Agents of Time: Chapter One; The Mansion
Well look at what got chosen as the final task of the day =D Hia Lady, I’m looking forward to our new and improved, more competent heroes =D Something’s not ...
Jan 8 -
Re: Sins Of The Father Chapter One: The Father, The Son & The Unholy Ghost. (Part. 1)
Hi Moth, I came for the next chapter. It took me a while but see, it can be done =D I like this first paragraph a lot more than the ...
Jan 8 -
Re: Woman in Black
Hio! I saw you being online earlier and wanted to check out the stuff you write :3 I already like the first paragraph :3 We get a strong feel for ...
Jan 8 -
Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 2
The Dice are biased =D Here we are again, let’s see where our mentally unwell sylph is going :3 Hmmm again I feel like you front-load wayyy to much description. ...
Jan 8 -
Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 2
In my country we are calling this the looping order. Like with knitting! Don’t look that up. Siiigh No wonder I was so thrown off by chapter “2” Let’s find ...
Jan 8 -
Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 3
So after a weird detour over the prologue I have finally reached Ch2. And my usual spiel continues: beautiful sentences 😊 But I do have things to say other than ...
Jan 8 -
Re: The Quantum Mind: Chapter 1
So since there’s no more Loosely Lawful to read and your NovMo project isn’t out yet, I put a slot of “something else from Vento” on my dice rotation [yes, ...
Jan 8 -
Re: Syboleth ch. 15: To Life
Ya know that it’s the AN itself that makes me not want to read this every time I open this chapter? I just… I really hate it when authors throw ...
Jan 8 -
Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 1
Hey Ravena, the dice chose you again (you have 2 stories in the running after all =D) I really like the beginning already, and how clear it is that we’re ...
Jan 8 -
Re: Delirium - Chapter 2
So I lit up a candle in celebration of the dice choosing Delirium Ch2 😊 And we’re still sticking with Lydia, good to know. Let’s see what diabolical things the ...
Jan 7 -
Re: Book book
Good Morning! That is a very long chapter. Have you thought about maybe breaking it up into multiple uploads to make it more palpable to readers? Second thought of the ...
Jan 7 -
Re: Chapter One: Donut Crumbs 1.2
Alright, the dice chose this over 15 other options =D Hi Lady, as promised, I have come for your story. And I kinda hope that this is the right one ...
Jan 6 -
Re: Delirium - Chapter 1
The dice have spoken and chosen the first chapter of Delirium for me to read 😊 Let’s head straight in! And my first thought is… that you could be more ...
Jan 6 -
Re: The Hope of a Kingdom
Good evening, Messenger 😊 Felt like doing a final review today and I like focusing on stories so much more than focusing on poems ^^ Hmm I already feel like ...
Jan 5
