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Re: Chapter One: Rule Number One: Don't Hack Your School Network. Or If You Do, Don't Get Caught.
Hi SanaPathan, I have so many things I want to read now that my Green Room work has winded down that I resorted to rolling dice. Congratz, the dice chose ...
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Re: Lovers in Blue
Hey Alex š A short story is much more up my alley =D Hm I find it a bit strange that we are talking about celestial objects and then you ...
Jan 5 -
Re: Abigail & Karley: Part 2- The Date
Alright, what a warning ^^° Here we go. But first, grammar. I cannot help myself. Somethingās wrong with this sentence: āthe sound of people laughing and talking filled the air, ...
Jan 4 -
Re: Surrender
Oh does that mean the sun? "The marble has gotten colder" That's a really nice metaphor! Remember that you need a dash for bone-deep :) Annd we're at the TW ...
Jan 3 -
Re: Winter Crush
Hi Alex, I wanted to take a look at your poem and so here I am :3 Hm hereās how my process went: from the first 4 lines: school crush? ...
Jan 2 -
Re: Eternal Beauty | Prologue
I am so sorry, but I didnāt realise thereās also a prologue. Why are you so confusing YWS Q_Q Oh Marin and Sugei are siblings. I ā¦somehow never registered that! ...
Jan 1 -
Re: Delirium (The Prelude)
Okay first review of the new year and who could I review other than you ? Happy New Year Ravena :3 Also I so did not expect the style of ...
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Re: Garnets on the Asteric Plane - Chapter 2
Decided it is time for more Garnets. Here we go =D I like that callback =D āthat was the size of his actual second cousin that was twice removed.ā Hm ...
Dec 31, 2025 -
Re: Chapter 4: The apartment
Ah I remember the previous chapter. Something about Minna and a Ghoul! Shouldnāt it be āliāl olā meā with these apostrophes? I like the way Simon speaks and also that ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Prologue
Hey Ravena, itās been a looong while. But I have finally settled down enough to read the first work in the TFR folder! I already like that you call it ...
Dec 29, 2025 -
Re: Death of a Showgirl: Taylor Swift, Womanhood, and Labor Production
Time for another essay review š Hmm I donāt think I understand what you mean with . Is this talking about quantity? Like a certain quantity of A is worth ...
Dec 29, 2025 -
Re: Loosely Lawful | 11
Oh I am afraid of this summary. Letās⦠cautiously proceed. Sera coming out swinging this chap, huh? Sera wished that the ball would just disappear to wherever Kyleās net-stick and ...
Dec 29, 2025 -
Re: Loosely Lawful | 10
Gooood morning, Vento!!! I wanted to wait and see if anyone else would want to lift these out of the Green Room first but I canāt wait any longer =D ...
Dec 29, 2025 -
Re: Syboleth ch. 13: The Meaning of Life
Ah I tried reading Douglas Adams but never really got into it. But I wonāt be biased =D That is a super long AN and you didnāt even ask any ...
Dec 28, 2025 -
Re: A Secret Behind A Paradise Two
Ah a short tip: Maybe you should put this in the same folder as chapter 1? Makes it easier to find it :3 Hmm reading this immediately after ch1 kinda ...
Dec 28, 2025
