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Re: He doesn't call anymore
Hallo Alex! The have begun. So I am back to reviewing poetry š Oh why the dash here? ā-looking for answersā It feels like a deliberate break in the poem. ...
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Re: Paper Straw
Alright the have begun. And as promised, hereās my thoughts ^^ I already like the name of your poem :3 And I figured from the very first lines that this ...
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Re: swear it on the sharp edge
Alright the have begun. Letās work from top to bottom of what I can do in the Green Room and hi, Silvern! I already really like the beginning. I understand ...
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Re: Loosely Lawful | 5
Aww I had to smile at the librarian following her everywhere. Also the stick thing, misappropriating it like this! āand she got to beat people up.ā I like a MC ...
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Re: Loosely Lawful | 4
And Chapter 4 too š Achtung, tho Thereās an apostrophe missing here: āThe temple kitchens made baconā right in the first sentence ^^° And this made me giggle: āIt was ...
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Re: Loosely Lawful | 3
Onto Chapter 3 š I wish there was any real hint on what exactly brough the adventurer system down. Just⦠a tiny teaser, a complaint from Sera. Ooofff five years ...
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Re: You don't know me
Okay, Quinn, I didn't really want to review any poems for the foreseeable future... But yours doesn't show up in the Green Room anymore, despite only having 1 review. So, ...
Dec 21, 2025 -
Re: release.
Hi Cats :3 Hope you have a good morning! Are you sure āchalantā is the right word here? I was an extrovert who was chalant and didn't care a fuck ...
Dec 21, 2025 -
Re: The March of the Proles (Part One)
Hello š I have come for another of your works in the Green Room, so letās head right in! And this time, itās sci-fi, a genre Iām getting more and ...
Dec 21, 2025 -
Re: Loosely Lawful | 2
Back for chapter 2. I will probably read all of them till the end of the month ^^ Ohh I like that Kyle has sharp eyebrows. In general, I really ...
Dec 21, 2025 -
Re: Loosely Lawful | 1
Hia! I came here on a recommendation so have my thoughts =D Ya know when Kyle remained confused, even after pulling out this āweaponā of his, my first thought was: ...
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Re: Tales from New Kakari: Remy (pt. 3)
There we go. I am ready. Yosh. Yosh, pls fix .-. āhid body going limpā The recurring nightmare recurs⦠Well, it would be way stranger if it werenāt doing that, ...
Dec 20, 2025 -
Re: Starcrossed Strangers
Hallo Flower! Kinda stumbled over your profile while looking for moth and now I am here =D Unfortunately, like the other reviewers, I also donāt know the source material and ...
Dec 19, 2025 -
Re: Dawn and Dusk
Alrighty, every time I sat down to read this first chapter of yours, something has happened to pull me away from it. So letās see if itās the case today ...
Dec 19, 2025 -
Re: Daffodils mean New Beginning
I saw you liking the Hindi Poem so hereās hoping I can compel you to comment on it too :3 Iām not a poem sort of person, so I chose ...
Dec 19, 2025
