Tikaya

So I came back from walking the dog, checked the Green Room, saw all the poems that still need to be reviewed, cried a little and then decided to read ...

Must say I already love the imagery in your summary. Stitching sanctuaray out of what hurt you and using pain as a way to structure life/the stitch work? That’s really ...

Alright this is abt Lorelei’s left behind brother. Let’s go! Ok first thing I notice is that your second sentence stretches over 4 lines and that is …that is way ...

Oh this has me think of my first sleepover too. I heard about it from classmates and was like: I want in on that action :3 So first of all, ...

Well call me surprised, I checked the folder for all the stories I missed and there is only this one xd Let’s go. Desdemona sounds very reasonable when she says ...

Regarding your summary, I think there is no objective way to judge poems so whatever you wrote, it’s probably gonna be all good xd Now, let’s do read it ^^ ...

Onto Ch3 immediately 😉 Ah and aren’t “Then I awakened. I woke with a start” just the same thing? Feels like if you leave out the first sentence you have ...

Alrighty on to chapter 2. Oh I rly like that her mom takes care of her and gives her plushies :3 Can relate to the doing nothing for 30 min ...

Just a small tip, maybe you want to structure your folders a bit more? :3 Onto the poem =D I really like this line here: “out of these blind sighted ...

Ah why is this not in the Green Room? I was wondering where this story went @.@ Figured I read something of yours that’s not a poem first before I ...

Ok first of all I think this topic is very sensitive and I approve of your summary. That this is what victims need to hear. That it’s not their fault ...

Hi rebel, Watch me procrastinate in real time while I look at this poetry work of yours xd Hmm my first thought is that these lines would work really well ...

Aww I like that you write poems for birthdays :3 Let me look at it too! I like the descriptions in the first stanza, a solid start! Feels very immersive ...

Good morning 😊 Let me get right into the review. I feel like you could have read over this again before and after posting. YWS swallowed some of your punctuation ...

Hi Ravena 😊 I rly think those lines are a very good explanation: That He or his kingdom could exist In a distortion even more intricate Like it would make ...