Tikaya

Hallo raindrops :3 Saw you doing some reviews last month and decided to give priority to your story ^^ Hmm let’s begin with a story telling advice: passive sentence like ...

Good morning, yosh. Starting with Nylon this time around 😊 Hm I had the thought if Lily and Cody talked abt the amulet a bit more that you could use ...

Hi canopy, I didn’t forget that you’re the first person to write on my wall. So let’s check out this poem of yours :3 I rly like the line full ...

Ah so if I understand this correctly, you’re not going to post more chapters of this here but instead want us to come to webtoon for more? Maybe you should ...

Alright, second chapter. I’m slow today but I hope this helps you anyway :3 I like this image: “echoing in waves that seem to chase after Lilian.” I do enjoy ...

Oh I already like this summary, very intriguing! I don’t think I like this description: “Besides this hint of masculinity, his perfect skin is completely unblemished“ I get that the ...

First of all, I like the name of the poem. Let’s see if it ties into the actual text itself! Ohh I like this: but I never really looked outside ...

There we go. Finally made it back to this story. It’s gonna be weird since I know something of the characters already =D …And we begin with a verrry long ...

Ah already the first line of Step 1 captured my attention. Nice comparison! Also the fact that when you are already down, you’re helpfully remembering all the other stuff you ...

Hia Smetana! Glad to see you’re writing novels =D Let me get straight into it. “Adam asked his mother“ that is redundant bc he already addressed the speech to his ...

Good morning, dove! „and their gaze shifts towards me” oh I could feel the DREAD in that line. And I like how you describe the voice of the narrator, that ...

Alrighty, final review of the day 😊 Hi dove! Oh I think from the first few lines that this could be abt having a panic attack? No air to breath, ...

Hey there! I have kinda read the first chapter so I am here for your second one now! That said, let me quickly say something abt ch1: Starting a story ...

The Green Room is doing weird stuff again so I want to try something by lifting this poem out of it. Aww I like the idea of the poem, of ...

So. The unreliable Green Room keeps sorting this poem to the bottom of the list. It might be a sign that I should prioritise it xd Oh I find this ...